White Picket Fence Discussion
New Scenes will be Posted on the Flash back — Lina and Phil (the younger years). I’m just starting this new thread so we don’t have to sift through so many comments
Flash Back — Lina and Phil (the early years)
PHIL Phil and Lina in high school… “Hey, Hunter wait up.” Phil slowed his stride, allowing a couple of teammates to catch up to him as he headed toward the lacrosse field. “Did you hear that Steve’s having a party …
New Scene — After Swimming Naked…
Lina lifted her cellphone, her lips curving into a smile when she saw Phil’s name on the display. “I just turned into our neighborhood.” “I know. I’m right behind you.” “You’re behind me?” Her eyes lifted to the rearview mirror …
White Picket Fence — Deleted Scene
“Your father and I are getting back together,” Lina told Katie when she arrived home from school. “I know,” Katie said as she set down her backpack and opened the refrigerator. “You talked to Logan?” “No. Grandma told me you …
A White Picket Fence — Deleted Scenes
Lina finding out about Steamboat in the original version of WPF — this was deleted and changed in the final… “Logan should be home any minute,” Lina told Phil when he came down freshly showered and in his dark lounge …
Unpublished Scenes from White Picket Fence
Phil breaking up with Kim (this would have happened in the very beginning of WPF – after Lina found the tie) Phil was at his desk working on a brief when he heard Kim’s voice just outside his office asking …
Swimming Naked…
coming in January 2019
Update — Swimming Naked is with the editor
Deleted Scene… “I was thinking about taking Logan and a couple of his friends to see the college lacrosse championship on Memorial Weekend, just the championship game,not the whole tournament,” Phil said to Lina when he arrived home with Logan. …
Swimming Naked — the sequel to A White Picket Fence
The draft of Swimming Naked is now in the hands of my editor. I should have it back in about four weeks. Opening scene of Swimming Naked… “Dadda…Dadda…up…up” “Just a second, buddy.” Phil was at the sink, screwing the top …
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